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One sentence, and the three ways it stops being one

A sentence needs a subject and a finite verb and must be able to stand alone. A fragment is missing one of those. A run-on joins two complete sentences with nothing between them. A comma splice joins two complete sentences with only a comma, which is the error the test asks about most.

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What it is for

You are about to mark this in other people's writing for a living, which means you need to name it, not only feel it. And the fix teaches the idea: a comma splice is repaired by a full stop, a semicolon, or a comma plus a joining word, and choosing between those three is a decision about how closely the two ideas are related.

How to think about it

Find the finite verbs. Two of them with no joining word between is a splice or a run-on. Then read each half on its own: if both stand up as sentences, you have two sentences and must choose how to join them. If one does not stand up, you have a fragment and must attach it to the sentence it belongs to.

Worked example

'The bell rang, the children left.' Two sentences, one comma. That is a comma splice
Both halves stand alone, so a comma alone cannot hold them.
Fix it with a full stop, a semicolon, or 'and': all three are correct and mean different things
The semicolon says the two are closely tied; the full stop says they are separate.
'Because the bell rang.' A subject and a verb, and still a fragment
Because makes it dependent. It has to lean on a main clause.
'Running down the corridor, shouting.' No finite verb at all, so no sentence
Two participles are not a verb that a subject can do.

Your turn

Name the error of joining two complete sentences with only a comma.

Two complete sentences joined by a comma alone is a comma 

The trap

Believing length decides. A very long sentence can be perfectly grammatical and a three-word fragment can be wrong. The test writers use long correct sentences as distractors precisely because length feels like an error.

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